Narrative Major

 This is my narrative about my Nan's horse major.

Here is my writing

 Major 

Major is a 17 hand horse. He lives at my Nans. Major is 22 years old.

Once upon a time there was my pop sitting on his bed. He was on his tablet looking on trade me. Oh look this is a good horse we will get it said pop. Nan and pop hopped in the car and drove off to get Major. 

Meanwhile mum, Tyler, Connor and I were coming to nans. “Oh mum, they're not here!” I said. They will be said mum. Ok mum I’m putting on TV I said. Ok whatever. Nan and pop came back! Said Tyler! Yay! We said. Why do they have the horse trailer on!?!?! Oh my… IT'S A HORSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! What's its name?Major said Nan.The end