Gorilla writing

 We did a snapshot of a gorilla in the grasslands.

here is my writing

My story continues…

The next second I was in the middle of nowhere!

There was standing a big… fat… ugly… GORILLA! Pat was whining so scared that I had fainted. The next 2 hours I was in the gorilla’s hands walking over the grasslands. There we saw majestic elephants and the scorching hot sun. ‘’look pat!’’ Said sam. A flock of birds! Woof woof! barked Pat. The birds flew. The gorilla sat down and put us down on the ground.

From far far we could still see the majestic elephants walk back home. And the flock of birds set off to bed.

Finally the sun went down behind the horizon. Me and Pat set off to bed too. The end.