I love your Easter story, because you used so many descriptive words to explain what was happening and how you were feeling. I felt like I was right there with you. It reminded me of when I was a child and tiptoeing quietly to see if the Easter Bunny had come. I like how you told me who was with you and you using the word "extraordinary".
Kia ora Olivia I agree with Tracy that you have used awesome descriptive words in your Easter writing. The sounds you have included are great, clock ticking, house squeaking, creaky floor ... I wonder if Easter Bunny does make eggs and where he would do this?
I love your Easter story, because you used so many descriptive words to explain what was happening and how you were feeling. I felt like I was right there with you. It reminded me of when I was a child and tiptoeing quietly to see if the Easter Bunny had come. I like how you told me who was with you and you using the word "extraordinary".
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ReplyDeleteI agree with Tracy that you have used awesome descriptive words in your Easter writing. The sounds you have included are great, clock ticking, house squeaking, creaky floor ... I wonder if Easter Bunny does make eggs and where he would do this?